Wednesday 13 March 2013

Using commas by Hayley

WALT: use commas to interrupt my sentence with more information.
SC: - I have a main idea.
       - I add some detail to my main idea by interrupting it in the middle.


My little brother is so annoying, he always pulls my hair, I wish I had a sister instead.


Jacob loves kayaking, he gets to go with his Dad, he'd do it every day if he could.



I love netball, it keeps me so fit, I play it every Saturday.


2 comments:

  1. I HERT NETBALL

    LOVE NET BALL BROOKLYN

    ReplyDelete
  2. I HAD A LITTLE GO AT NET BALL PRATICS TODAY HALEY I LIKE IT IT WAS OK ELLA

    ReplyDelete