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After netball on Saturday, Chloe came over to my place. First of all we had spaghetti on toast and a sausage for lunch. It was yum.
Then we went to my room and played with some toys. Chloe brought some toys too.
Finally Pete, Chloe’s dad came and asked if Chloe could stay for a sleep over. My mum said “yes”.
For dinner we had nachos and for pudding, chocolate mousse.
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